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Old 17th March 2000, 04:20
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I saw my love walking on her own.

Tall and slender, dreamy eyes,

with primroses in her hands.

i leapt to still a kiss;

she cried:
"Help, help, thief!"
(rumi)
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Old 17th March 2000, 05:59
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Salam....

lol! Blue0space.

Rhyming poems r the best!..

wassalam
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Old 17th March 2000, 14:18
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Old 17th March 2000, 22:46
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One from my school days

I only know that god above,
created you for me to love.

I chose you from the rest,
because I think you are the best.

If I die before you do,
I will wait by heavens gate for you.

If you are not there by judgements day,
I will know that you have gone the other way.

I will give the angels back the wings,
with golden harps and golden strings.

Because my love for you is true,
I will even go to hell for you.


This poem I don't believe in the contents any more but it does rhyme.
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Old 20th March 2000, 11:23
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i don't do literature. but to me rhyming doesn't seem too necessary. i mean it's good to read a poem that rhyms and that's it. some times poems that don't rhymes can rhym very perfectly. not literally but mentally. or may be it's just my personal experience.
The world is full of mysteries!!

My heart is so small,

alomost invisible.

How can you place such big sorrows in it?

"your eyes are even smaller", he said;

"and yet they behold the world".
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Old 20th March 2000, 11:50
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that was beautiful, ahad. thanx.
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Old 20th March 2000, 15:24
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My turn.....
It's easy to find me
Just close your eyes
I'm living inside you
A dream in your mind...

I'm searching for a star
to follow where you are,
I'm wishing on a dream
to follow what it means...

Waiting in anticipation to
have you caress me for all
sweet eternity...
Yours"!
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