Poems

[SNOOP_KUTHA]

fank u please

yeh its about u lol..naa u kno who its about


jus 2 keep up my badboy image, id like to say, ive not gone soft, me neanderthal man, build fire can build, wiv jus 1 aubergine

[angeleyes]

Originally posted by SNOOP_KUTHA
fank u please

yeh its about u lol..naa u kno who its about


jus 2 keep up my badboy image, id like to say, ive not gone soft, me neanderthal man, build fire can build, wiv jus 1 aubergine

LOL @ Snoop.

Ehem...I don't know who she was...give me her name and the full story Feeling in the mood for some gossip...

[angeleyes]

Could I have been so wrong-
Feeling what I did?
Believing what I did?
Am I blinded by the glamour of today,
Distracted by the colourful universe?

You turn away in frustration,
Your face distorted with anger.
Helplessly you walk down the road, which lead you futher away from me.

Hours pass and turn into days
Yet I sit as if paralysed
Unable to take the two steps which will bring me closer to your soul.

[angeleyes]

A burning heart
A soul in agony
The past haunting me in my dreams.

Barren trees
Frozen lakes
Melting your heart with a touch of grace.

Empty rooms
A creeping silence
The crowds gathering inside my head.

Yesterday gone
Living today
Who knows if tomorrow will come...

[angeleyes]

(By INM)
Sumtimes luv isn't enough,
sumtimes luv even hurts.

Life doesn't guarantee you luv,
coz luv is a luxury that not everyone can afford.

[an-najm]

AA,
WOW

So much feeling AngelEyes. Def some of them touched so many cords. Some tear jekers. MarshAllah.


Orginally posted by a sister on another Forum

NIK:ISLAMICSISTER

What r ur interpretations of dis poem?


My Heart…like yours is thudding violently
Time stops
You’ve consumed me
Reigning my mind completely, finally understanding that even oceans can’t divide the raw pain inside.
Tryin’ to collide?
But you, like me have experienced death and now I’ll wait and see
If I’ll join you in a place where I’m grateful that you destroyed the worst part of me
Will I drag you away from that place? Taste bitterness instead of sweetness.
Are you experiencing hardship and pain because I chose this world over you do you still sacrificed yourself to save people like me? Do you hate me? You’re friends with Reality and I’m possessing you blindly.
Fighter, soldier…are you my soldier?
I’m a temporary hider, …am I a forgiver?…no.
Killer?…yes.
Did I kill your memory? I’m not sorry and I won’t deny it.
Am I part of your family? Will you ever love me? or will you see the monster within me and externally and turn away repulsively
Just accept no one but me. it’s too easy….right? Crazy to think, blink. You’ve got doubts…you think your insane, messed up in the brain. Delusional, you’re mystical, sometimes hysterical.
I see you cry for me, I laugh at you mockingly. You cry because of the evil sins I devour for you, deny it that it’s not true.
I know you don’t want to stay in this hellhole for long, but before i leave, give me a goodbye
Don’t cry.
I dare you to bring your fist to the mirror and kill me or you could change me so I’ll be with you for eternity.

[angeleyes]

Originally posted by an-najm
AA,
WOW

So much feeling AngelEyes. Def some of them touched so many cords. Some tear jekers. MarshAllah.

Thanx for your comment


Orginally posted by a sister on another Forum

NIK:ISLAMICSISTER

What r ur interpretations of dis poem?


My Heart…like yours is thudding violently
Time stops
You’ve consumed me
Reigning my mind completely, finally understanding that even oceans can’t divide the raw pain inside.
Tryin’ to collide?
But you, like me have experienced death and now I’ll wait and see
If I’ll join you in a place where I’m grateful that you destroyed the worst part of me
Will I drag you away from that place? Taste bitterness instead of sweetness.
Are you experiencing hardship and pain because I chose this world over you do you still sacrificed yourself to save people like me? Do you hate me? You’re friends with Reality and I’m possessing you blindly.
Fighter, soldier…are you my soldier?
I’m a temporary hider, …am I a forgiver?…no.
Killer?…yes.
Did I kill your memory? I’m not sorry and I won’t deny it.
Am I part of your family? Will you ever love me? or will you see the monster within me and externally and turn away repulsively
Just accept no one but me. it’s too easy….right? Crazy to think, blink. You’ve got doubts…you think your insane, messed up in the brain. Delusional, you’re mystical, sometimes hysterical.
I see you cry for me, I laugh at you mockingly. You cry because of the evil sins I devour for you, deny it that it’s not true.
I know you don’t want to stay in this hellhole for long, but before i leave, give me a goodbye
Don’t cry.
I dare you to bring your fist to the mirror and kill me or you could change me so I’ll be with you for eternity.

After reading the poem it reminded me of me and my bongi man

Naah seriously, haven't analysed a poem for ages...can't figure out whether it's directed to another person (the 1st half suggestes this) or to oneself (2nd half) My guess would be it's abt choices and changes that we make in life. How they affect others as well as yourself.