Love poems?

[yayati]

i wrote a beautiful one yesterday...its gone now though, my memory has erased it...i dint write it down
next time i will...

here is a crap one i wrote a few months back though (its not really crap it came fromte heart but got bad reviews for this one and it sounded off-key basically because when u try to express urself and the most heart wrenching emotions spill over u tend to express it in a kitsch or cliched way that makes it sound rather corny and re-hashed)




The moment I saw you
My eyes looked up
Toward the stars.
O what a sight you are,
Could it be that such a dazzling delight
Could have fallen from the sky?
O what a beauty
There is no one like you in all the worlds.

Day had overtaken night
Still, there you sat
Occupying my mind,
Illuminating all things
With your radiance.

I have lost my innocence,
Lost my courage to speak,
I have lost everything at that instant I saw you.
Even my heart is lost to you.
Yet I have found you,
In that moment I knew
I was in love.

The moment I heard you.
I heard melodious jingles,
I heard your nasal tune.
I heard the promise of love,
With biddings of faithfulness.

The soft whispers
And the shy giggles
Make my heart race
To find you.
I realised then... I loved you.

I thanked God that great music was made,
For it is inferior in every way to the sounds made by your neck.
When your voice rose in anger,
It had risen like arctic ice.
Freezing my heart, still,
And holding it there;
For your angry tone sounds
Just as pleasant to me
As the sound made by the Indian flute.
At that moment I knew I had fallen
In love.

The moment I inhaled your odour
I was reminded of the fresh lakes...
Streams, Rivers and waters of my childhood.
Your fragrance is that of Mother Earth
Entwined with lotus blossoms.
You smell like home, the country of my birth.
I have arrived to where I belong.
From that moment I knew
I was in love.

This moment I desire to taste you
Your aroma is alluring to my palette
I want to sink my teeth into your flesh
Hush, do not be weary
I only mean to bring you pleasure.
How can you deny me the taste of peach
When all my life I have been used to eating dusty rocks?
I am in love with you.

This very moment I want
To touch you
Your skin has goose bumps
Because of my presence
Let me soothe your skin
And warm it for you.
Let me wear this skin of yours tonight.
You already own everything of mine,
Please do not be greedy.
What is the harm of sharing this skin?
I want to melt into you
Because I realise I love you.